Jack tapped his wrist and held up two fingers--two minutes before the charges went off,
Jack and his hand signals. Loved that.
And THANK YOU for describing a concussion with some degree of accuracy (I think, I’ve only ever had a very mild one). Note to writers: Blows to the head are serious injuries. How many times have they knocked Jack (or someone else) out and then had him running around a few moments later perfectly healthy? That's a pet peeve of mine.
Carl sighed, shifting in his chair. "Leave no man behind, yeah?" Carl said, finally.
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Jack and his hand signals. Loved that.
And THANK YOU for describing a concussion with some degree of accuracy (I think, I’ve only ever had a very mild one). Note to writers: Blows to the head are serious injuries. How many times have they knocked Jack (or someone else) out and then had him running around a few moments later perfectly healthy? That's a pet peeve of mine.
Carl sighed, shifting in his chair. "Leave no man behind, yeah?" Carl said, finally.
Oh, the foreshawding!
Great fic.